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Heres my second story!!!

Posted by Kingzant - September 21st, 2008


Hey guys! Heres the second story! Enjoy! Well, I might have to split this into two parts. Anyway, enjoy!

Akatsuki Story 2-part 1
-Hidan, Kakuzu, Deidara, and Leedove are still in marketplace-
Hidan: This is your friend, right? Cool.
Leedove: I know I am! :3
Kakuzu: Lol
Deidara: Im Deidara.
Hidan: Hidan here.
Leedove: Nice to meet you guys!
Zetzu:-returning from market- Hey guys! I got every- who's that?
Kakuzu: It's my friend, Leedove.
Zetzu: Oh. Well, hi.
Hidan: -examining bag- Hey, Zetzu, you said you got everything...right?
Zetzu: Yea, I did get everything!
Deidara: Then why is the bag only half full...?
Zetzu: Um... I... had lunch...
Kakuzu: What?? You idiot! -kicks his shin-
Zetzu: Ow! Dude! What was that for?!?
Leedove: Did you forget already?
Zetzu: Oh... yea...
Deidara: Stupid.
Hidan: Retard.
Kakuzu: Stupid retard.
Zetzu: Okay, okay! I get it! Gawd! }:(
Leedove: Lol
Kakuzu: Holy crap... That better not be who I think it is!!!
Hidan: Oh no...
Deidara: Holy crap! Its-
Kakuzu: Dont shout!
Leedove: Who is it?
Kakuzu, Hidan, Deidara, and Zetzu: It's Tobi...!
Tobi: -Being dragged off by guards- Aw...cmon! I just wanted to ride the animals!
Woman: THIS IS A PETTING ZOO! NOT A RODEO!
Young boy: -crying- Waah! He pushed my lolly out of my hand!
Woman: Alright, calm down. Ill get you another.
Tobi: HOLY CRUD!! IS THAT A BAKERY?!?
Leedove: -whispers to me- Is he crazy...?
Kakuzu: Oh, you have no idea...
Tobi: -tears away from guards, and charges into bakery- Whoo!!!
Guards: Get him!!
Hidan, Zetzu, and Deidara: Hahaha!!
Kakuzu: Wow.
Tobi: -charging out of bakery holding a bag of cookies- You will never get me!!! :D -jumps into trees-
Leedove: He IS crazy.
???: -comes up from behind us- Whos crazy?
Kakuzu, Hidan, Deidara, Zetzu, and Leedove: -jumps up in surprise, and turns-
Deidara: Tobi?!
Kakuzu and Zetzu: Oh...no.
Tobi: -eating a cookie- Whos crazy?
Hidan: Where the HECK did you come from?
Tobi: Oh, that was the decoy Tobi!
Leedove: Im not even going to ask.
Kakuzu: Me either...
???: Believe it, believe it, believe it!!
Zetzu: Aw... another retard?!
Deidara: God, I cant stand more than one retard!
Tobi: -leans in on Deidara- You shouldnt talk about Hidan like that...
Deidara: Im ignoring that.
Tobi: You said something! -grabs another cookie-
Leedove: Hey... isnt that Naruto?
Naruto: Believe it, believe it!!!
Hidan: God! Shut UP!!
Leedove: He seems a bit... annoying...
Zetzu: Oh, come ON! You cant be serious! "Seems a bit annoying"??? This guy is uber retard!
Deidara: Lol
Kakuzu: -presses fingers against temples- I have a headache...
Tobi: Want a huuug...? :D
Kakuzu: Oh god! Last time I had to go through three hours of some old dude walking all over my back!!! NO! I do NOT want a hug!!!
Hidan: Um... sounds nice.
??? and ???: Hey! Is that you Kakuzu?
Zetzu: MORE friends?
Kakuzu: Shut up... -brings back leg, as if to kick-
Zetzu: No! Please, not again!!! :( -holding shin-
Kakuzu: -sigh- Hey SuperSoni- I mean, SSD! Hey Goofyka!
SSD: Hey Kakuzu! Whats up?
Goofyka: Yea, its been a while!
Leedove: Some more friends?
Kakuzu: Yea. Oh, nothing much SSD.
-heads back to Kakuzus home-
Deidara: Man... I need to get out more.
Zetzu: What do you mean?
Hidan: It means he gets bored too much.
Deidara: What? No! I meant-
Tobi: HAI GUYS!!!
Kakuzu: God... SSD, Goofyka, please, avoid Tobi.
SSD, and Goofyka: Okay...?
Kakuzu: -makes a large dinner, and sighs- Enjoy!
Everybody: Thanks!
Leedove: Yea, this looks good!
Tobi: WOOT!!!
Kakuzu: Why are you still here???
Tobi: I dunno. :3
Kakuzu: Well, Im going to bed. Ill see yall later!
Everybody: -finishes meal- Bye!

Okay, that concludes my second story! Hope you liked it!!!
No offence to anybody! I want to tell everybody about this! Wait, that's your job!!!

Tell me, what was your favorite part?


Comments

Hug!!!!!!!
Cookie!!!!!!!!
Hey Wait..........<a href="http://i165.photobucket.com/albums/u62/p-froggy/Naruto/Akatsuki/Yachiru_V_S_Tobi_by_ChromedMoon.jpg">http://i165.photobucket.com/albums/u6 2/p-froggy/Naruto/Akatsuki/Yachiru_V_
S_Tobi_by_ChromedMoon.jpg</a>
Deidara !!!!!!!!! Is My Cookie!!
<a href="http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q1/muffinqueen2011/Naruto%20stuff/Akatsuki/Deidara%20and%20Sasori%20and%20Tobi%20and%20Zetsu/Deidara/deidara__s_cookie_by_KnuxsChik.jpg">http://i132.photobucket.com/albums/q1 /muffinqueen2011/Naruto%20stuff/Akats uki/Deidara%20and%20Sasori%20and%20To bi%20and%20Zetsu/Deidara/deidara__s_c ookie_by_KnuxsChik.jpg</a>
-_-
<a href="http://i314.photobucket.com/albums/ll435/The_Black_Knight_2008/tobiisNOTagoodboy.jpg">http://i314.photobucket.com/albums/ll 435/The_Black_Knight_2008/tobiisNOTag oodboy.jpg</a>

I couldnt see the second one... but the first was the best.

Nice! I loved it! :D

Thanks! Worked hard on it!

Well done my friend.It was very funny.=3

Thank you! What was your favorite part?

Is it one of those dialogue stories?

Um... I dunno. Maybe?

New Menber
Axl2396
Kakashi akat

Cool! Kakashi is cool. :3

My fav part had to be when Tobi said"You shouldn't talk about Hidan like that."

I know! I laughed at the idea, so I had to add it! :D

Plus, I liked the "decoy Tobi"! I am kinda amazed about my own ideas!

Awesome storie.
Oh I did.
None taken.
My favorite part was when I went more friends, ans he was about to draw back he's leg and kick again.
Oh god, not again plaesase.
LOL
So much fall sout of chaire laughing so much.

Lol, Im happy you liked it!

I'm sorry.

What? Why?

aww im not in the story

Did you ask to be in...?

haha cool story ^_^

Thanks! I know, its funny! :3

i'm back

Yea, youve been gone a while. Where were you?

Oh I did I did I did I did
How are you?

Im doing well. But bored. Again.

You?

Impressive, it gave me a couple of laughs, keep up the great work

Thanks! And I will, gladly!

Look The Post The GIGGABOO

Lol, I will.

hello i saw u comment on my page so i just came here so wats sup :+)

Ah. A comment follower, no? :)

Well, nothin much is happening... You? :D

ok whatever

Okay...whatever?

HI !!!!!!!!

HI!!!

too long; didn't read.....sorry TT_--

Hm? Cant you read it later?

yeah I could read it later......but stories written in this style drive me crazy...I can't stand them.....but I'll try to read this one ^_-

See, ill tell you a secret... I am going to cange the way I write these, so itll be like a book. Sort of. ^-^

really?!?! awesome!!!! oh yeah...my favorite part was where Tobi says "You shouldn't talk about Hiden like that..."

Yea, thats everybody's favorite part!

And I am going to make a new post explaining that.

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