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Kingzant
I'm a pretty chill guy, and I've been called "retro," which seems to fit nicely. So, yeah, I'm up for anything. I love to game, listen to music, n stuff like it.

Age 27, Male

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Joined on 5/20/08

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My first story! EVAH!!!

Posted by Kingzant - September 20th, 2008


I know people like to make up stories, so I guess Il try to make up one myself! If you guys like this one, then tell me, and I might make another!

Story of Akatsuki Pt. 1

(All Akatsuki in main HQ)
Pain: Tobi! Calm down! We need to get this plan down for the invasion!!!
Tobi: Nevah!!! :D
Kakuzu and Hidan: TOBI! YOU RETARD!! STOP IT!!!!!
Tobi: :(
Pain: -sigh- Alright, we ready?
Itachi:-snore-
Sasori: Itachi...get up! -makes a puppet hit Itachi-
Itachi: Hey! If you do that again...Ill use my crazy torture thing on you!!! }:(
Sasori: ... What?
Itachi: -sigh- Nevermind... -sleeps...again-
Zetzu: -coming out from kitchen, holding half of a chicken-
Kakuzu: Dude! What is THAT???
Zetzu: Um...my lunch?
Pain: Will you guys... um... nevermind... we will just do this later...-leaves-
Hidan: So, Kakuzu, anything new happining?
Kakuzu: Nope... not really. Honestly, Im really bored.
Hidan: I know... Hey, guys, if you need me, Ill be in my room working on a prayer.
Everyone: Whatever...
Tobi: Deidara!!!!!!!! :D
Deidara: OMG!!!
Kakuzu: Lol :)
Konan: I just got back from the spa... Did I miss anything important?
Pain: -comes back from wherever- Since when do you go to the spa??
Konan: Well, every girl needs to relax, right?
Tobi: KONAN!!!!!!!!!!
Konan: Oh God... here comes Tobi. Umm, Ill be in my room!!! -runs in and locks door-
Tobi: Me wanna see Kon- Omg are those cookies?!?
Deidara: No, crazy man, MY COOKIES!!!
Tobi: Tobi want cookies!!! :D
Deidara: No, Tobi! -runs off with cookies-
Tobi: Wahh!!! Me wanted cookies!!!
Kakuzu: Lol
Itachi: -wakes up- Umm...
Zetzu: Move! My legs hurt from standing! -picks up Itachi and sets down on floor-
Itachi: WTF?!? I was there first!
Zetzu: O RLY???
Itachi: YA RLY!!!
Zetzu and Itachi: -both starts to fight-
Kakuzu: HEY GUYS!!
Zetzu and Itachi: WHAT?!?
Kakuzu: GO OUTSIDE AND FIGHT!!!
Zetzu and Itachi: FINE WE WILL!!!
Hidan: -comes from room, fuming- Guys! I cant concentrate while there's so much screaming!!
Sasori: -turns up music MAX- ^,.,^
Hidan: -grabs big scythe thing and breaks stereo- Gawd! Finally, I can have some quiet!
Tobi: HIDAN!!!
Hidan: Oh crap!!!! -runs away-
Kakuzu: Haha! Tobi, you are awesome!
Tobi: Kakuzu!!! Me hug!!!
Kakuzu: Oh gawd!!!!!!!!
Tobi: -grabs Kakuzu and nearly breaks his back-
Kakuzu: HELP!!!!!!
Everybody: LOL!!!

This ends the first. I hope you liked it! If you want me to, Ill put you in my story!
In this, I was Kakuzu, becuse that's who I am!
Ill see ya later!
Oh, and godpervert, I am saying, NO OFFENCE!!!

Every time I read over this, I smile. It couldnt be helped! I hope you smile too!

If you are in my story, do not complain how you may not have a big part. As you can see, every character has a fair share of parts.

My first story! EVAH!!!


Comments

Very funny
But I Want a Hug Of Konan.....
<a href="http://i314.photobucket.com/albums/ll435/The_Black_Knight_2008/8136224_84.png">http://i314.photobucket.com/albums/ll 435/The_Black_Knight_2008/8136224_84.
png</a>
Or..........
<a href="http://i314.photobucket.com/albums/ll435/The_Black_Knight_2008/sakuraandkonan.jpg">http://i314.photobucket.com/albums/ll 435/The_Black_Knight_2008/sakuraandko nan.jpg</a>

Alright, Ill try to get something like that in my next one.

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Aw... you dont ike? :(

LOL
Halariouse.
And yeah, if you don't mind, can I be in it?
LOL
It was awesome.
I laughed and smiled.
It was a perfect way to keep me luaghing.

Thanks! And of course, Ill be glad to put you in! :D Darn you Tobi!!! :3

Look My post

Okay.

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my day sucked today................................
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Aw...how?

my head hurts................................
........but it was funny....

mow where did i put my headache med's?

Lol, thanks. Hope you feel better.

Don't worry, buddy!
I always like newest reviews!
You sure like a lot of games...
So, your a fan of Zelda and Mario, eh? Good games.
Reply on my profile please, thanks.

Yea, I grew up with the Mario Bros., and then I started on LoZ.

And sure, Ill comment! :)

Nice Story! ^.^

Thanks!!!

Not just nice. It's AWESOME!!!!! :DDDD

I know. :3

I have a preview out for my second story now!